Epilogue
To blight a mellow thought; condemn a verse,is labor without toil in moment's fray.The venoms not the blood the serpent said,it's spit of rotting words that bury dead.We from a redder red, a hue...
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CB: I truly enjoyed some of the phrases for their sound and imagery. In particular:We from a redder red, a hue perverse,I think may refer to poets, if so, nicely said. Unfortunately, I have not...
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A really cool rhyme scheme and meter makes for a lovely sound when read aloud. Only prob. is I have no idea what it all means.Sorry.Sue******************"To have great poetry there must be great...
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Hello, Crazybored. I think this poem has potential - you have good imagery/language, perhaps you just need to make the poem a little less abstract to allow the reader in?
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